A gal has bribed ma heart,
I just can define this art ,
Bribed me through her thoughts,
Ma heart pretends not to be caught.
I have shared ma dreams ,
You hear me, ma heart screams.
Wave the signal green,
I wish I have the first date with an ice-cream.
I wonder wats all this -at the end of season,
I don’t want to miss u for any reason .
Happy -I have some-one to share ma burden,
I have not experienced this with any other women.
Let me not face a defeat ,
Ma heart ticks, ur heart beat,
This is not a state of Dead beat,
Finally I woke up from a wild sleep!
12 comments:
Whos that Lucky girl da??????????my guesses were shortlisted to 3 girls.........i hope u r telling abt one in those
nachi very bad u r so partial da .....two r there but u told about just one wat about the other ???............
anyways nice poem nachi poet !!!!!!!!good keep it up .....
dai ithuku shortlisting laam theveillai . only one girl i know . dai ithu poem illa love letter da
Good wrk nachi,,,;)
Nice lines to Feel for ur Gal..
Goahead.....
i think she will be waitng for after reading this...
I have shared ma dreams ,
You hear me, ma heart screams.
Wave the signal green,
I wish I have the first date with an ice-cream. intha lines mattum not dreams i guess :P
athu enna last line..chumma nadikatha da...:D
Seri ithellam pogattum..first topic is not apt...
"MA DREAM GAL" nu thana da en kitta sonna.. ippo etho potturukka.. :P
seri seri overall a good proposal for her..:DK K ..good....
daii nachi athu enna nanga comments panni ta apuram u changed the topic from my dream gal to thoughts never die ....................
hmm
we want a valuable reason for this wy u changed the topic???
dai naan than post le soliten le this nt poem . this is a love letter
dai dogs ! listen tis is ma thoughts only na ! apram enna ... i dont want tis thoughts to fade ! thts y i have named it so !
chance less machi beautifully written da!
Thoughts Never Die
When will the DREAMS comes true ?
Call for your wedding da,
koodiya seekiram veliya vanthudum da ellam..
mavane apo iruku unaku.. ivolo feel panni eluthirukiye da.
en anda last line scene.. padikara ellorukum theriyum. en veena nadagatha podra..
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