High flowing thoughts of cerebration,
To climb up the ladder of intellection,
With a desire to create my destination,
Unknowingly I preferred this institution.
Campus prowled by spying vultures
They are management made provocateurs.
Who are completely empty-headed
Students feel spy system is unwanted.
Now Gone!!!! are those years,
Yet ma friendship, never shed tears,
They are my energy gears,
Friendship groomed us together.
These people enriched ma college days
Never the less they are ma co-prison mates.
Though we had quire of imposition
With out any limitation.
Affable staff members,
Morphed us to complete professionals.
Enough of all these altercations,
15 comments:
Mach great poem da.........it would be great with these linesat the end da........
I WILL SEND THIS POEM TO MY F**KING INSTITUTION
VERY SOON AFTER MY GRADUATION........
haha U ROCK mach.........
Never the less they are ma co-prison mates.
Though we had quire of imposition
With out any limitation.
Affable staff members,
Morphed us to complete professionals.
.......these lines r grt da. romba feel panni eludiruka. aduvum anda WITHOUT LIMITATION ngara word laye nee ethana thadava impos eludirukanu puriya vachuta :P
Dai y to be sad whn leaving da ?? just enjoy these days n don be sad for leaving... But the words u have used in ur poem r really beautiful.. nice work da.. cool :)
thts how it is da !! fact only na
dude really good work da....the poem was too good... u've given life to our feelings by dis poem da...change d title as "our college life"
gud wordz n u expressed evrythin in rite way ;)
macha feelings ah irruka da... these were the ones which we would discuss all the time.. reminds me when we guys had been standing out not finishing the assignement da. gethu macha
-Abhinav
Macha really nice.......
I have no words to tel about this macha....
Nice nice nice............
So genius man....
Macha one doubt da, Do u had any experience in love ever b4.....
samma gethu da..nice to see all the comments...but they dono tat i'm behind all these works...lol...;)
u are behind de other poem da !
hmmm well done nachi epathila irunthu poet ah maaruna???
gr8 work da...din knw ur such a gud poet..
hrt ah touch pannite!...
i liked d luv/frndship d best :)
"Never the less they are ma co-prison mates.
Though we had quire of imposition
With out any limitation.
Affable staff members"-Machi room pottu yosichicha kuda ippadi flow varathu da!!
But these words wer uttered by everyone atleast once durind d period of 4 yrs rigorous imprisonment
I really loved the word SPY when it comes to international spy, i read more stories. But it get affected by this local spy - when i join this coll. they(coll) really exploited the true meaning of that word - I worried.
the poem was super. i too feel the same reaction.
I like to see more creations like this from u dear.
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